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I need to start thinking more about how I want to write. I’ve spent so much time focused on what I want to write that I don’t know if I spend enough time figuring out how I want to write. In my early 20s, I became obsessed with World War Z and Rant, and that has sent me down this road on Oral Histories.

I’ve enjoyed oral histories.  I love the angle that they provide.  I love feeling like everything I am writing is unique.  I loved writing a political sci-fi dystopia in that vein.  And I love writing this hard sci-fi through the same oral history vein.  I’ve always made the argument that oral histories do a wonderful job of arranging the characters like an orchestra so the historical tale becomes the main story rather than the characters themselves.  

But I do believe this will be my last oral history.  I will finish it.  I’ve been thinking about this generation ship adventure for too long not to finish it.  I’ve enjoyed writing it.  But when it is done and polished, it is time for me to pivot back towards novels.  Dialogue.  Proper character building.  It’s time I start practicing the things that oral history doesn’t employ.

This year has been a year of reading for me. Almost halfway through the year, I am 21 books in, far surpassing previous years. And I have been letting myself explore more and more sci-fi in the vein of understanding exactly what it is that I wanted to write. The thing is, it came in the most unexpected of places. I’m almost caught up in the Old Man’s War Saga. I enjoy it, but that’s not what I want to write.

I remember saying my favorite sci-fi was sci-fi that is literary in nature with sci-fi features. I don’t want to hear about the first person on Mars so much as the 17th mission to Mars and the heartache that the main character has to go through as their daughter dies in a car accident back home. I don’t even want my characters to be the most important characters in the world. I want them to help us experience what is happening.

The Radiant Dark by Alexandra Oliva is one of the best books I’ve ever read. It is absolutely magical in its light touch of science fiction “first contact.” I can almost imagine the author laying out a thin line of events—barely enough to fill a page—first signal received—response—language—probe. On that foundation, she built a beautiful story of individuals within a family that struggled to hold itself together.

To be fair, I identify too heavily with these books due to my lived experiences.  My first born being premature.  Moving across the country a couple times and ending up in the Seattle region.  So much more.  The characters pulled me in and made me want to know more.  When there were developments in the “first contact” storyline, it felt like a treasure to gobble up in the same way the characters were excited.

This book has helped me reimagine how I would like to try science fiction. I want to try my hand at what I can only call Literary Sci-fi. You can do this on top of anything: living on the moon, a generation ship, or colonies on new worlds. You can even place it in near-future sci-fi like dystopian AI. You can tell the story of I, Robot without being the central character, and I would argue that that would be a much better way to tell that story.

So here I am.  Three projects.  Past.  Present.  Future.

On the Record: An Oral History
100% – Now available

When I was 22, I wrote my fourth novel, The Stagner Chronicles. It was the strongest work I’d produced at that point in my life. On the Record is the result of a comprehensive overhaul and reimagining of that book — a chance to revisit the core ideas with better tools and a wider perspective. I’m proud of how it came together and of the new life it found in the process. It’s now available for purchase.

Continuity: An Oral History of a Generation Ship
50% Done with Rough Draft – Rough Draft will be completed by end of 2026

I’ve slowed down. That being said, the halfway point has been very exciting to write. I am reaching the end of part three, which will be great to write. But it’s hard to hold back as I think about part four. Part Four will start to pivot toward preparation for colonization. The culture shift within the ship is going to be substantial, and I am excited to explore that.

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Trying to narrow it down

I know my next books will mirror this literary science fiction. But that only narrows it down so much. I will explore how previous ideas I’ve fleshed out will fit in this model in the coming months. I expect this to be my major project for 2027.

2023 in Review

2023 was probably the busiest year of our life (so far).  With Sofia taking over ownership of the café, both boys in preschool, and Richard balancing school and work, we had very little downtime.  We spent most of our time in Tacoma: at mama’s café, at the glass museum, at the beach, or just taking the light rail for a joy ride.  

Noah had his third birthday on June 2nd.  He has turned into a full fledged toddler this year.  He is still attached to mama and papa and notices immediately when we leave the room.  He asks questions all the time, and has perfected his angry face when we say no.  Noah learned the word Friend this year and will often remind us that Henry is his Best Friend.  They maintain a friendship that has its own hilarious games and often devolves into screaming and crying.  

Henry turned five on December 27th.  He has become absolutely obsessed with trains—from the Brio tracks running all around our living room to the light rail that he asks to ride every single day.  Henry has blossomed in the last year—quickly building an expansive vocabulary.  He is independent and know what he wants.  He rides the bus to and from school every day and loves it.  He is excited and ready to start Kindergarten next year.

Sofia became a business owner!  She bought the first half of Red Elm Cafe on January 1, 2023.  She will become sole owner on January 1, 2024.  The cafe has about ten employees and sits at the center of the Hilltop Business District.  Sofia spent a good deal of the year learning the ropes and preparing for the role of sole owner.  Sofia has quickly become a recognizable face in the neighborhood and often will run into people she knows from the cafe.  

Richard balanced his job as the Assistant District Manager at Social Security with taking classes at Tacoma Community College.  He is currently on track to graduate with an Associates in Accounting in March of 2024.  He took over the bookkeeping for Red Elm Cafe in September 2023.  In October he spent a week in Colorado for his father’s surgery and returned in November for the first round of chemotherapy.  

Reflecting on my 20s

On March 17th, 2019, I will enter my 30s.  As my 20s wind to a close, I can’t help but reflect on how much has happened over the last decade.  In order to prepare myself for the decade to come, I want to reflect on the time gone by.  I gathered my favorite moments and consolidated them here.

Wrote my first novel

I graduated college

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Got rejected from the Peace Corps

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Substitute Taught in dozens of schools in Greeley, Windsor, and Fort Collins

Ran for School Board–Lost

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Move out of my parents house

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Wrote a novel

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Voted for Obama 

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Met the Woman of my dreams then promptly left for Peace Corps

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Spent 13 months learning a language, interacting with a new culture, and teaching

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Moved to New York with the woman of my dreams

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Started my Career

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Got Engaged

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Got married

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Started brewing

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Voted for Bernie

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Got Hudson

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Moved back to Colorado

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Got pregnant

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Bought a House

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Got Titan

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Found out my unborn son had Gastroschisis

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Welcomed my son into the world–spent three weeks in the NICU

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Laid a penny floor and created my home brewery

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Now, onward to my thirties…