How to present the story

I need to start thinking more about how I want to write. I’ve spent so much time focused on what I want to write that I don’t know if I spend enough time figuring out how I want to write. In my early 20s, I became obsessed with World War Z and Rant, and that has sent me down this road on Oral Histories.

I’ve enjoyed oral histories.  I love the angle that they provide.  I love feeling like everything I am writing is unique.  I loved writing a political sci-fi dystopia in that vein.  And I love writing this hard sci-fi through the same oral history vein.  I’ve always made the argument that oral histories do a wonderful job of arranging the characters like an orchestra so the historical tale becomes the main story rather than the characters themselves.  

But I do believe this will be my last oral history.  I will finish it.  I’ve been thinking about this generation ship adventure for too long not to finish it.  I’ve enjoyed writing it.  But when it is done and polished, it is time for me to pivot back towards novels.  Dialogue.  Proper character building.  It’s time I start practicing the things that oral history doesn’t employ.

This year has been a year of reading for me. Almost halfway through the year, I am 21 books in, far surpassing previous years. And I have been letting myself explore more and more sci-fi in the vein of understanding exactly what it is that I wanted to write. The thing is, it came in the most unexpected of places. I’m almost caught up in the Old Man’s War Saga. I enjoy it, but that’s not what I want to write.

I remember saying my favorite sci-fi was sci-fi that is literary in nature with sci-fi features. I don’t want to hear about the first person on Mars so much as the 17th mission to Mars and the heartache that the main character has to go through as their daughter dies in a car accident back home. I don’t even want my characters to be the most important characters in the world. I want them to help us experience what is happening.

The Radiant Dark by Alexandra Oliva is one of the best books I’ve ever read. It is absolutely magical in its light touch of science fiction “first contact.” I can almost imagine the author laying out a thin line of events—barely enough to fill a page—first signal received—response—language—probe. On that foundation, she built a beautiful story of individuals within a family that struggled to hold itself together.

To be fair, I identify too heavily with these books due to my lived experiences.  My first born being premature.  Moving across the country a couple times and ending up in the Seattle region.  So much more.  The characters pulled me in and made me want to know more.  When there were developments in the “first contact” storyline, it felt like a treasure to gobble up in the same way the characters were excited.

This book has helped me reimagine how I would like to try science fiction. I want to try my hand at what I can only call Literary Sci-fi. You can do this on top of anything: living on the moon, a generation ship, or colonies on new worlds. You can even place it in near-future sci-fi like dystopian AI. You can tell the story of I, Robot without being the central character, and I would argue that that would be a much better way to tell that story.

So here I am.  Three projects.  Past.  Present.  Future.

On the Record: An Oral History
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When I was 22, I wrote my fourth novel, The Stagner Chronicles. It was the strongest work I’d produced at that point in my life. On the Record is the result of a comprehensive overhaul and reimagining of that book — a chance to revisit the core ideas with better tools and a wider perspective. I’m proud of how it came together and of the new life it found in the process. It’s now available for purchase.

Continuity: An Oral History of a Generation Ship
50% Done with Rough Draft – Rough Draft will be completed by end of 2026

I’ve slowed down. That being said, the halfway point has been very exciting to write. I am reaching the end of part three, which will be great to write. But it’s hard to hold back as I think about part four. Part Four will start to pivot toward preparation for colonization. The culture shift within the ship is going to be substantial, and I am excited to explore that.

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Trying to narrow it down

I know my next books will mirror this literary science fiction. But that only narrows it down so much. I will explore how previous ideas I’ve fleshed out will fit in this model in the coming months. I expect this to be my major project for 2027.

A short hiatus

Sorry for disappearing for the past couple weeks.  I’ve been figuring out life now that the crazy summer schedule is done.  It’s hard to get used to how little there work there is everyday.  I’ve found myself wishing I had more to do everyday.  Well…maybe I will do more writing.  I’m slowing finding things to work on, but in the meantime, I have plenty of story ideas and poems that have been piling up inside my mind.  I have been working on one piece of Flash Fiction the past couple days.  Here it is.  I hope you like it.

The Man & The Box

Remodel complete

I just spent two hours remodeling my website.  It is now ready to explore.  As I update with more writing over the next few weeks, the earlier years will begin to fill up with content   Until then, the content from 2012 is full enough to keep you busy.  Here is the link.  Let me know what you think about the new website.

2012

Don’t Fret. Just Write.

I spent a good deal of time last night wondering how I was going to write my current story.  I worried that I didn’t know how to do it right.  I worried about the order the story should go in.  I worried about this and that.  In the end, I pretty much gave up on figuring it out.  Instead, I just wrote.  It may not have come out perfectly, but it came out.  I got 500 words on paper last night.  So far this morning, I’ve already put another 500 words down.  The story is starting to come together.

Today’s poem is a special one for me.  I wrote it second semester of my 8th grade year.  I had a huge crush on a girl in my class.  I had no idea how to tell her.  Instead of gathering up the courage to talk to her, I gathered up the courage to give her a poem.  I printed it off and slipped it in her locker during the last week of classes.  She never made any mention of the poem.  But, after that, I had a small amount of courage that made it easier to talk with girls I like.  This poem is my introduction to romantic life in High School.

Speak of a Sin

 

Back to Writing

For the first time in quite awhile, I am writing again with a great level of consistency.  Along with this comes the concern of disclosing what I am writing.  It’s difficult to talk about what you are writing about without losing the excitement.  So, in the meantime, I think I am going to work on re-organizing the website so that it can include older works.

I started writing 9 years ago–at the age of 14.  It started with romantic poetry.  It developed into flash fiction.  That quickly turned into short stories.  By the time I was 20, I had written my first novel.  The thing is, I don’t have many of my older writings here.  They may not be as good, but I love the idea of presenting them as a way of seeing my progress.  I will likely start updating them this evening.

It will take awhile.  In the meantime, check out an old Sci-Fi Short story.  A recent discussion with a lovely girl reminded me of it.  I think you will love it.

The Prototype 

Snow in the Forecast

 

Certain things spark a writer’s imagination.  As I think about my writing history, I have three sparks.  Change.  Romance.  Weather.  In the past week, I have come across all three.  I found romance for the first time in two years.  I changed so much–moving and determining what to do with my romantic life.  All the while, mother nature decided Autumn would be a short lived thing in Colorado.

My imagination has sparked.  While driving back to my home town this Wednesday, I heard that there was snow in the forecast.  Before I knew it, my mind was elsewhere.  The moment I got home, I started writing.  What came of it is my first bout of creative writing in weeks.  I hope you like it.

Snow in the Forecast

 

The Final Draft

And, with the strong of a key, the final draft of “The Stagner Chronicle” is complete.  I’m so glad to be done and get it out for everyone to see.  I am going to order a copy today via Lulu.com to make sure the formatting is alright.  If it comes back clean, I will open the book for public sale and link it.

Four book down, a lifetime to go.

Back to the Grindstone

 

I’ve taken an extended break from writing the last couple weeks.  Now, as my world settles down, I am back to work.  I am preparing a new fiction story that I will likely write into a novel…simply because I need a creative outlet.  I hate  it when I finish writing novels.  It’s like being part of a play and then realizing you have nothing to do after closing night.  Luckily, I’m in control of my own writing and I have plenty of ideas that I’d like to transform into words.

I’m also slowly working away on the final draft of The Stagner Chronicle.  I will likely have copies available to general public in October through Lulu.com.  I’ll keep you updated as I make some progress.  I’m about a quarter of a way through my final read and it is still pretty clean.  I can’t wait to get it out to you guys.

 

Kickstarter Update

I just finished imputing all the grammar/spelling/syntax errors that my beta readers caught.  That means that the fourth draft of The Stagner Chronicle is now complete.  There is plenty of work left to do.  The editing process has entered the polishing stage.  This is where things get annoying.  All the big problems have been caught and changed.  Now it’s all about the small problems.  I want this novel to be as clean as possible before I send it out to my readers.  If you want to join the campaign, click here.

Today’s article is one of the most extreme and interesting things I have ever written.  I spent a good deal of time researching the flow of money in our world…and it left me extremely worried about the way the world works.  It is definitely worth a read for anyone who has ever wondered if there was another way.

Follow the Money to Understand the Power Structure of Our World